My poem

A poem with "ow"

I am a person so shallow

Always feeling so mellow

I don’t know how to play cello

But when I meet my fellow

The least I say is a hello

A poem with "ew"

I wake up this morning to a Monday Blue

I headed straight into the loo

Remembering I have my IA report soon to due

That makes me feel even more "euy"

Then I cut myself a slice of honey dew

Wanting so much to share it with you

But what I have is just so few

So I just give you my view

Yet your face color turns into dark hue

May be tomorrow we can start anew

A Poem with "eak"

Writing my IA report I needed a break

This one I should take

So I went and sat by the lake

Sipping away my milk shake

A serendipity so fake

A poem with "ame"

I am so lame

Trying to act like a great dame

Keeping my heart aflame

Never yearning to have it tamed

Nor wanting to get any blame

Go on and tell me "What a SHAME"

A poem with "est"

Tomorrow I will be having a test

All i need now is a just rest

So I go to a fest

Trying to be a normal lass

A poem with "ask"

This is such a hard task

Our relationship is like a mask

I want to discuss about us

But you make such a big fuss

All I want is for this argument to last

A poem with "eon"

I tried act like Leon

or is it Delon

Trying to look like a felon

To others, I look like a melon

A poem with "oww"

After reading these, some people may feel wowed

While others may feel awed

Some may even take a bow

But this is all for now

Disclaimer: These poems are written originally by me. If there is any disheartening issue in the content, please voice them out. If you wanna take any poem, feel free to do so.

cheers,

Erwin Liong

6 Responses to “My poem”

  1. Erwin Says:

    I welcome any critics, be it healthy or negative.

  2. Matthew Says:

    Wooo… U can write poem one huh? Power.. Haha.. keep up the good work man! Jia you

  3. Erwin Says:

    Mattz, I can write simple poem only… But never as good as ur skill in Tiqiu….
    Perhaps should write something on tiqiu also.. ;P

  4. Matthew Says:

    Ok loh… Oooooooooostrichhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

  5. just-NopHie Says:

    hmm…i thot you are supposed to write your report? >.<”
    Nice poem tho quite general…but like the way it sounds and also the capacity of your brain in inputing all the same sound vocabs without losing the primary meaning…bravo aye!! *(”,)*

  6. Erwin Says:

    Remembering I have my IA report soon to due
    That makes me feel even more “euy”

    Writing my IA report I needed a break
    This one I should take

    Noph, I do quote myself.. ;P

    Writing IA report is such a boredom… Writing a poem is much better.

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